Saturday, December 12, 2009

Shall I wait more?


It looked like a dream, a poem.
I sat there.
Spent every moment thinking about you.
Looking at you, for you.
Sometimes, found you, many time lost.
I dreamt and I continued doing that.
I simply sat there in silence.
I lost my courage to talk with you.
I moved a footstep ahead and a million behind.
I sat there with a hope that you would turn around and break the silence.

I pursued. I waited. I dreamt again.
You disappeared. Just like that.
Everything seemed empty.
I looked around, I searched.
Lost you somewhere. Lost my heart, my mind.
Still I sat there.
Waiting for you. To see you. To be with you.
Not a lifetime.
Just for a second. Just for a word.
Or just one moment of silence together.
I had been awake all night. Looking at stars.
Thought, you might be counting them too at the same time.
I sat there,
till the dawn.
Bright hope. New day. The morning sunshine.
The wait continued.
In silence.
I just sat here.
All alone. Yet with you.
And watch the moon sleep and sun rise.
Birds chirp. Dews falling.
I sat there with your memories,
you with my shadow.
I sat there in silence,
You with my silence.


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PS: the girl is a real character kicking her life as of this very moment.

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17 comments:

  1. its so sweet........
    its really feel great.....
    now i m dam sure abt u....

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  2. don't sit there waiting....get up and do something.........

    nice 1 again :)

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  3. "Waiting for you. To see you. To be with you.
    Not a lifetime.
    Just for a second. Just for a word.
    Or just one moment of silence together."
    mureed ho gaye hum tumhare... :)

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  4. great work..
    :)
    really like the last 15 lines of it..
    keep it up!

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  5. @rashmi... u sure abt wht??//
    @anks.... yaa.. m not sittin there anymore.
    @souvik.... thnks for the visit dude.
    @Amul... dhanyawad sirji (^_^)
    @Ipsita.... sure.. thnks

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  6. @SIDDU Sir.. thnks for visitin my blog :)

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  7. :) sahi tha be. thoda jada senty tha...

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  8. @Amey... ya. i knw it was a bit sentimental. Hope the girl too get a bit of senti after reading this. :)
    @Pranita... Sure. i would. But u do keep on commenting coz it encourages me to write more.

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  9. "beta,i dint know u were so gud at writing poems...it was simply awesome..makin its way straight to d heart"....lookin frwrd for more such poems from ur end..

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  10. @Swatss... Thanks for the appreciation di!!

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  11. good poem dude..........but a bit senti....

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  12. everything felt real n true... as if i ws living all u wrote! :)

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  13. @Akhilesh... i agree, its is sentimental
    @Surabhi.. Thanks! Do come back for more post!

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  14. @Surabhi.. We forget forget tht no one is watchin. We forget tht no one is keeping count. Its no one, but us. :)

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